I've been around for a while, well, thats perhaps a understatement to some, but from my perspective it isn't, But then again, time and other such concepts are so much smaller then me, they might as well be like an atom to the physical worlds.

But like the atom is to the physical worlds, elements like time, space and even things that could be considered words, are to me, so despite how minuscule they may seem compared to my stature, they are an undoubtedly important part of my being, without which I wouldn't necessarily exist as I am, so in short, time is one of my building blocks.

But just because time is a part of me doesn't mean it affects me as it affects others, like I don't "see" in chunks, but all at once, although my sight doesn't necessarily work as yours does, as I don't need eyes, just people knowing me to be able to "see", and then my more traditional minds can take all this information from everywhere I have, am or will look and make sense of it, and describe it in word those physically bound can comprehend.

Like at this moment, I'm now seeing a time before time as we know it, I'm seeing all the time during that terrible first calamity when everything was at war and my light really started to shine for the first time, the wants of justice by mindful souls became plentiful and unavoidable, then things settled down for a good long run.

Now I'm seeing when I eventually became a spirit of good, aswell as THE spirit of justice to the mortal souls of this continuity, I even met Michael, Walter and his son and of course that boys girlfriend, all for the first time, and lent them my power, and well, things where going quite happily for this first run.

That is until the day came where one of The First, (in fact it was The First, who I now call friend), made a Discovery, had an epiphany and decided to rewrite everything and put in new chapters to the book, so to speak, kinda.

Now most didn't even notice this calamity caused by The First's hand, The vast majority of conscious beings living in or connected to the mortal continuums where either so far below or beyond physicality that this event didn't really affect them. 

However for a being such as I, it did, And my goodness was it something gorgeous to witness, to feel, My consciousness, that I had already assumed lacked a true limit for at least an eternity, suddenly with an almost calming explosion gained new dimensions to it, levels beyond what I had known with sights into realities where I scarcely recognized what my light, my color, or even what I was and connected to physically and metaphysically.

In a few worlds I remember seeing through the shining eye of a tall spire, sitting on the shore of a prosperous city during a prosperous time full of, ultimately, empty people, one of these individuals sat in a large house directly across from me in this form, and would look over frequently, twas a sad affair, tragic.

In another I was a star, monumental in size and with power I almost couldn't believe, however despite the majesty of my beingness here, and the beauty of the celestial landscape that surrounded me, the horrors of this reality made themselves apparent to my cosmic vision and right after that, I discovered my relative helplessness.

I could not speak, I could not move, the well of power that was inside this vessel of mine, no, WAS this vessel of mine, It was completely denied me by a coffined skull who lorderd over this body and particular multi continuum as a whole as tyrannical kingpin of doom.

I was ultimately only able to watch as countless died a true and total death in the pursuit of obliterating this roaring snaggletoothed beast from this reality, which they eventually did, excellent, although at a price, and with arguably worse evils taking the former grotesque skull lord's place, interesting.

And yet in another world, instead of my light being that of justice, It was of determination, although in a way also still represents justice, and it was harnessed by creatures who thought themselves wise, but these children, they harnessed my power from my echo in this reality, and eventually made these queer devices to channel my power that they would give out to those deemed worthy, who would become peace keepers of the literal stars, fighting for justice, they even have masks, all like Walter from my home In some ways.

...

My home, in the literal infinite cosmic landscape of my mind, where omnidirectional and temporally limitless thinking is ordinary and constant, Not until now have I once thought of that continuum as my home, or if I have I never noticed.

I think it's time to go home then, at least the active 3rd dimensional part of my consciousness, besides, I'm needed there more then these other places at the moment, they have there own vessels of my power and echos of my will, and that Sam fellow back home must be dealt with, I also think that Michael is ready for my gift again, although technically this will be the first time for this version to receive my blessings.

Goodness, this kind of thinking is so complicated, how do those physical thinker beings put up with it.

Now where was I, ah yes, alright I do believe Walter will need some assistance on this one, especially with what Sam has been up to, and I know just the seer to seek out for a helping hand.

And here's the rest of the comic

And here's an image I took for scale to show just how small this thing is

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*note This is a bit of a spitball idea so when I eventually do do a comic or story on this character some aspects may change or be altered*

Born in Timbuktu to a African father and Indian traveler mother from day one it was clear that The Handy Man was a unique soul being super strong right out of the gate

As he grew up He became more and more hairy until he resembled more of a kind of werewolf than he did a man, however despite this his parents and extended family still loved and cared for him He even got a pet tiger from his mom's side of the family

And despite the turmoil in his homeland he had a surprisingly healthy life growing up, although he did have to learn how to defend himself and his family from those who wish to take advantage and exploit them,

many people came seeking to capture this mythical "hairy man of Timbuktoo" as some sort of freak show act, or try to capture his parents or other family members to blackmail him imto becoming a freak show act and every time this happened handy man would rush over alongside his pet tiger and using his insane strength and cleverness, would save the day

But as the years went on, and these people became more and more relentless in their attempts to capture the him, alongside having a vision in his dreams, He decided to leave for America, But before this he lifted his parents home and took it to a place where the people trying to capture him would never look and find them

His family accepts his decision of course and his father gifted him a very special club that had been passed down from generations that resemble a star, handy man's father also reveals to him that he comes from a lineage of royalty and that club first belonged to one of there ancestors who some called the richest man in the world

And so the handyman and his tiger began walking and walking and walking until they got to the coast were upon discovering that it would cost money to travel via boat the two decided to swim to America instead

Then we see the beginning of the original comic stirp with many comic strips from the original handyman run still happening to him in this timeline but eventually he decides to join a circus that pays him well which is where he meets two other good natured strong men

Hugo Hercules (soft spoken gentle Giant Melungeon strongman whose uncle is one of the people running the circus) and Samson the strongman (hot tempered, heroic, competitive and Jewish with a bit of a Napoleon complex), together the three (and with his tiger technically making four) made sort of strongman group at the circus,

Them showing off how strong they were while Also showing their personalities off in various ways sometimes even incorporating comedy (sometimes intentionally through a routine and script and other times unintentionally due to fumbles or Hugo and Samson getting into bugs and daffy-esque disagreements That would eventually have to be broken up by the handyman), competitive tests of strength and wrestling and even a kind of cultural education in the in the form of Them casually telling stories from their cultures as they perform incredible feats of strength All into their routine

The three grew so close that they considered each other brothers And even After the three went their own separate ways they still kept in touch with each other, All three inviting each other to important events in their lives such as family gatherings, marriages, funerals and so on

Hugo even called upon his brothers to take his place after getting injured while doing some super heroics with his team of fellow old time heroes and mystery men ironically enough called the heroics

However that's a story for another day

This story is a part of my own version of Handy man for my own projects and the Handy man originally created by Carl "Bunny" Schultze and info about the original comic strip can be found here and a decent chunk of his comic run can be found here in black and white

American Atom is a superhero from the broken dreams continuity of the goldaverse

However unlike most post war heroes within this reality who are illegal or vigilante heroes, American Atom Is a If not the only hero sanctioned by the US government

Created by accident in the 60s the American Atom Is an atomic hero whose body may have been destroyed by Atomic energies but his mind wasn't and reformed using these energies, however although his mind wasn't destroyed it was fractured causing him to forget who he was

The government seeing an opportunity jumped on is and gave him a new government sanctioned personality and identity as the American Atom, the atomic man who fights against communism and is an unknowing pawn to America's biggest enemy, but I won't spoil who that is

Do to forgetting his identity he is in almost a consistent state of silent turmoil however the love he has for his country, it's citizens and good people in general cause these darker thoughts and self doubt to go to the back of his mind,

how ever he does have someone to confide in about his situation, long time friend and wealthy scientist Teddy who trys his best to help his friend remember who he was and be there for him when Atom needs to vent his emotions and let loose a bit

These visits become all the more frequent after he's put in charge of tracking down the illegal superhero group the 6th squadron and he begins to see the darker and more villainous acts of his government in a light where it's becoming harder and harder to excuse them,

Doubt is almost the core of the American Atom, doubt about his identity, doubt in his government, doubt in his ideals, and untill he can make sense of it all and cut through the lies and strings that bind him, he will not and can not sleep soundly at night

I think I'm going to do a story in the broken dreams canon of the goldaverse where the golden age Blue beetle is the father of the first Charlton blue beetle with the first Charlton blue beetle being renamed to Daniel Garret Jr,

now that part would remain canon in both the main universe and the BD canon of the goldaverse but they would start to diverge after the war with the golden age Blue beetle getting captured by the US government and his wife getting killed forcing sparky (the original side kick of the blue beetle) to basically raise the young Jr in secret, taking on alternate identities, then have jr eventually become a hero like his father with the same origin he has in the original Charlton comics him finding a mystical scarab and then swearing to find and save his father but he eventually falls to the same fate he originally does and is killed but instead of the mad scientist being on his own this time he's backed by the US government, but also like in the original stories Ted kord is there for his friend and trys to save him, but blue beetle knows he is dying and unlike in the original universe successfully passes the scarab on to Ted who mixes it's power with his technical know how and becomes his own version of the blue beetle (renamed shining beetle) alongside the now much older sparky who swear to finish what the second blue beetle started

Maybe even have this version of Ted secretly fund and be a member of the illegal superhero group fighting against the curroptus government

Just wanted to Post this saying I've been working on stuff still and just recently was able to finally get certain equipment I needed so hopefully production on a few things will pick up in the near future and I'll be able to get my Groony stuff done

On the topic of that I have figured out the name for my Canon of work (this includes everything that I've done unless otherwise specified)

I have called this Canon the calamity-verse, so far this includes and predominantly consists of two different intertwined multiverses, those being the Goldaverse and there's the Diamoverse 

These two multiverses have one primary reality and the prime realities of these two multiverses are deeply intertwined and have consistent crossover with each other although time is a bit funky between these two prime universes

Now real quick The goldaverse and it's multiverse have a focus on public domain superheroes, with its primary timeline being one where all public domain comic book superheroes exist in from the golden age and some from the silver age with also in the prime timeline of the goldaverse world War II and Europe ends early would be successful capture of Hitler by The main elite superhero team of this universe by in Japan it's still goes just as long however only one nuclear bomb is able to be dropped as the second one is intercepted and sent into deep space by one of America superheroes

After the war a new political party forms around the superheroes from world War II and by the '50s a superhero is elected president which causes a huge amount of changes that it's timeline compared to our own especially with events like Vietnam not happening

But there are various different timelines were different things happen, like a bad timeline called broken dreams were it's far more similar to our world (if a bit bleaker) cause certain events either didn't happen or changed for the worse resulting in a world that by the '70s as fully outlawed unsanctioned Heroes and a rag tag group of vigilantes (gathered together by a time displaced future hero by the name of trashman whose future timeline got destroyed due to the rulers of that timeline wanting to monopolize God and God not liking that very much) are slowly repairing the damage That's gone untreated for years while also unraveling and nefarious plot from an old foe, or a timeline of the mystical and undead, and so on and so fourth, also this is the multiverse that my Sgt spook script/story takes place in

But then you have Diamoverse which has a focus on more character's of my own creation and a primary universe or timeline that closely resembles our own, this is the home reality of groony and green guy, or well, groony and green guy's human or physical forms

Of course green guy is in hell a land that exists in the devine realm and infinitely higher dimensional plane then the mortal multiverse/omniverse and as the name suggests this is were the gods exist, with Valhalla, heaven, mount Olympus, hell

and beyond those locations you have places like the source plans a closed off land of simultaneous order and chaos ruled over by a constantly angry god of order with a giant head named haxos, there's also the fai lands where all the fairy's and fairy tale characters live, and even boom town, a small kingdom in a perpetual Victorian wild west state with steam punk technology and this small Kingdom being ruled by old wise emperor Norton alongside it being were many spirits of notable figures reside such as mark Twain and there's so many more places in this devine realm, with all of them existing in there truest forms here,

also this is were the embodiments of concepts live like death and life, creation and destruction but probably one of the most notable is the jolly old sandman king Morpheus who rules over slumberland alongside his wife mother goose  

WARNING GROONY SPOILERS AHEAD, CONTINUE READING AT YOUR OWN RISK 

Slumberland is were the groony comics and cartoon take place in, with groony in the mortal multiverse being a cartoonist and veteran of Vietnam among many other things, because of this creative mind he has the power of being a steward of imagination and create a entire permanent reality within slumberland, however do to his trauma this reality was taken over by gribly, the literal embodiment of trauma who is constantly at odds with his brother proochie the embodiment of healing and aid 

Anyways, just thought I'd share this info publicly since with what I have cooking this info is going to become really important and wanted to have something to point to that would hopefully help explain stuff

Hello all whoever may be reading this, my name is holo and I'm a cartoonist, Writer, storyteller, comic historian and archivist and all around lover of sequential art,

And this is one of my comic scripts based on the golden age hero Sgt spook, a police officer who died do to a chemical explosion he caused and came back as a ghost to fight crime

I personally am a huge fan of this character and the golden age as a whole and since this character was public domain I decided my hand at writing a comic story staring him but for various reasons it didn't exactly work out that way

another reason I wanted to do this is because I discovered this characters existence through a YouTube video made to literally just make fun of the character, so I wanted to make this story to show the characters potential,

The best way I can describe spook is like if the DC hero Deadman got crossed with a pinch of ghost rider and the irreverent silliness of Deadpool while also having the deductive reasoning of Batman and somehow the innocence of Jimmy Olsen 

So now I'm releasing this, the raw script to the internet, and as far as I'm concerned this script is in the public domain just like the rest of Sgt spooks story canon, all I ask if you do decide to reprint, retell, adapt or otherwise redistribute the story is that you credit me the holozler as the creator of the script and of course shout out to the original creator of Sgt Spook Malcolm Kildale

I'm told this is creative commons

Anyways, that's enough of my rambling, your here for the story, so here is is

Sgt Spook: Spook the Crooks

Art by Jordan

Pg1

Action: we see Sargent spook happily walking down the street, whistling a tune, walking through a fire hydrant until he hears a siren from the distance

Sgt spook: what's that

Pg2

Action: quickly, sgt spook run floats to the commotion and finds a bank, the police have just arrived

Pg3

Action: out of the bank comes a group of robbers shooting at the police as they run off down an alleyway as sgt spook watches

Sgt spook: I better stop those fiends

Pg4

Action: sgt spook floats over to the robbers car and grabs their fender as they drive away, he rips off the fender off instead of stopping them it looking to passers by as if the fender fell off

Sgt spook: well, I still can stop them, just have to get a bit more creative

Pg5

Action: we see sgt spook find a fire hydrant

Sgt spook: if I time it just right, I can use this hydrant to wash those crooks out, really rain on their parade 

Action: he waits until there in the perfect position 

Pg6

Action: and then he starts his plan, opening the hydrant when the crooks are right in his crosshair, only for the gushing water to give the crooks a boost instead of "raining on their parade"

Sgt spook: oh shoot, I need to find something else

Pg7

Action: over this page we see several attempts of sgt spook trying to stop the bad guys, each attempt fails and only serves to aid the criminals, like him trying to fling some thumb tacks in the street only for them to hit the police cars and cause them to spin out, him trying to create a barricade by knocking over a few things into the street only to create a ramp and so on and so forth of failed attempt after failed attempt 

Pg8

Action: we see sgt spook, the Sun is going down and he's been following them for a while as the once City landscape is now country

Sgt spook: I am getting these guys, and I'm tired of stuff not going my way, I'm getting these crooks, once and for all

Pg9

Action: we see the crooks drive in and park at an old shabby farmhouse, it's night time and the crooks exit their car and quietly make their way to the farm house, shiftally looking around as they do so

Pg10

Action: they all enter the house quietly and the last one in shuts the door as quietly as a church mouse and they all walk over to a table

Pg11

Action: they all sit down one by one at the table, they sit there for a moment

Pg12

Jerry: well boys

Action: one of them pulls up and slams a big bag of money on the table, they all begin laughing and bring out booze and go through their spoils

Jerry: we did it ha haaaa

Pg-13

Jerry: alright boys, get to counting, once your done will split our earnings

Bill: aw common Jerry, can't we celebrate a little more before we start countin

Jarry: no, we gotta get this done and taken care of quickly, we're taken a risk staying here to long

Dave: aw common, you saw how it was out there, it's like God himself sent an angel to protect us, relax yourself and have a drink

Action: Dave offers Jerry a bottle of booze

Pg14

Action: Jerry looks at the bottle for a moment and ponders until grabbing it

Jerry: alright, but we can't get carried away, we'll have some drinks and celebrate a little, but by sunrise we're outa here got it

Jon: alright boss

Bill: gentleman

Pg15

Action: we see bill holding his bottle up

Bill: I propose a toast not only cause we didn't get caught, not only to the loot, but also to Jerry, our leader and brave planer, untightening his ass for once haha

Action: everyone begins giggling except Jerry

Bill: but in all seriousness

Pg16

Action: we see bill hold his bottle high into the air over the table

Bill: here's to us and our new found moolah, here here

Action: every one clinks their bottles together over the table while here herring

Pg17

Action: the lights go out as soon as the bottles meet

Jerry: oh #$&@ it must be the coppers, we gotta-

Bill: Jerry calm down, it's probably just the fuse box is on the fritz, this place was abandoned for a while before we came along, Jon

Jon: yeah boss

Pg18

Bill: can ya go and check the box and fix the lights

Jon: sure thing boss

Action: the giant of a man lumber's out of the house

Bill: alright, wall he's fixing the problem we can do a little bit of celebrating, bottoms up boys

Dave: wait, 

Pg19

Dave: gentleman, you mind if we say grace before we-

Action: the lights flicker back on

Bill: well would you look at that, Jon got it fixed faster then I expe-

Action: before bill can finish two blood curdling screams are heard causing the three men to start reacting their own ways, Jerry seems very freaked out, Dave is worriedly looking towards where the sound is coming from and bill is freaked out but keeping a stern face

Jon: YEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAHG

Pg20

Dave: oh my Lord, did y'all hear that

Jerry: sounded like Jon, do ya think

Bill: , you guys really think Jon is in trouble, he's probably just messing with us

Action: the two stare at bill for a moment

Bill: what, you don't believe me

Pg21

Action: they stare for a moment more

Jerry: no we do not

Bill: alright then, grab your guns and come with me, and will see that I'm right

Pg22

Action: they walk outside, and something is watching them from atop a windmill, Jerry sees the thing and quickly turns to his friends as they walk but he looks back the thing is gone (this is shown by a group of four landscape panels the first is of the guys walking and the thing on the windmill in the, the second is Jerry noticing it, the third is Jerry turning back to his friends reaching out to them as his head covers the thing, and the final one is Jerry turning back after his head passed the windmill and the thing is gone)

Pg23

Action: they continue walking to the back of the farm, Jon holds a lantern and his pistol, while the other 2 only have their pistol, they turn the corner, they all seem to be shocked at what they see

Pg24

Action: the power box is busted up, seeming to be absolute savaged by a blunt object, there are definite signs of a struggle besides that with some of the overgrown shrubbery around the area being broken, Jon's pistol and family heirloom that went through three wars lay broken to pieces on the ground

Jerry: do ya still think this a joke bill

Bill: well, at least I'm not afraid of my own shadow

Pg25

Action: we see bill and Jerry start their argument in the background as in the foreground we see Dave notice something, Wall they argue we see Dave find a blood splatter that leads him to markings that implies someone was dragged, then he looks where these marking go and sees the field behind the farmhouse with a scarecrow in the center of it

Jerry: the hells that supposed to mean

Bill: you heard me you big sissy, your a coward and you've always been yellow between the ears

Jerry: I think you're forgetting who the boss is around here boy, I planned the Robbery and

Bill: and you hid behind us as we did all the heavy lifting, you may be smart but you have the backbone of a chicken

Pg26

Action: Dave begins looking closely at the scarecrow and he looks more and more of the scarecrow becomes more and more visible with the camera perspective of the panel zooming in, while the face is still masked by shadow and darkness, then a cloud pases by the moon and the lunar light is shined on the scarecrow, and Dave is horrified

Bill: and even then I think I'm giving you to much credit

Jerry: now you just listen here you mindless brutish wild gunman, I ain't cowardly, I'm cautious, and think more then just one step ahead, if you didn't have me I bet you would have all just ran into that bank shot everyone took the money without even setting up a home base and-

Bill: and look how good having a home base is turning out

Pg27

Dave: Jesus almighty!

Bill: what the hell i- oh god

Action: now completely visible the scarecrow is clearly Jon crucified, his face bloody and vacant, the men's stare and shock and horror, a sorrowful breath leaving his lips, seemingly his last

Pg28

Action: all of them begin running back into the house and Jerry and Bill begin barricading the door

Jerry: what the hell man what the hell

Bill: I don't know, I don't know

Dave: did y'all see it

Pg29

Action: while the two men are barricading the door turn to face Dave as he stands looking away from them into the house 

Bill: yes I saw it, Jon was beaten to death and hanging on a cross

Dave: no, no not that, the thing next to it

Jerry: what do you mean next to it

Pg30

Dave:...

Jerry: Dave, are you ok

Dave: I saw something next to Jon out der, it looked like a, like a copper, but, but all wrong

Action: while Dave speaks Jerry and Bill are looking concerned as they look at each other

Dave:... I don't think god aided our escape today gentleman

Pg31

Dave: I believe it was the devil, and he has come for our sinful souls

Bill: Dave are you ok

Action: Dave turns to bill and Jerry shocking them, Dave's his face contorted in horror and humor

Dave: and he's come after me second

Pg32

Action: Dave lunges at his comrades laughing and crying manically, bill and Jerry doge out of the way, Dave crashes into the barricade Jerry and Dave made

Pg33

Action: Dave is staggered

Bill (hushed tone): we gotta hide, upstairs quick

Action: Jerry nods, panic in his face, and they quickly go up stairs as Dave slowly gets up from the floor

Pg34

Action: Dave gets up and looks around, his arm broken, grotesquely snapping back into place

Dave: it is no matter, the devil will get you soon he'll get all of us soon, all of us sinful, 

Action: Dave's head shakes violently for a moment, and his voice seems to change

Dave?: villainous crooks and Your Ill gotten gains shall be taken to justice

Action: Dave continues his manic laughter and crying

Pg35

Action: we now see Bill and Jerry upstairs hiding freaked out soon the laughter and crying gets accompanied by crashing and bashing

Pg36

Action: the commotion stops, Jerry looks out the window and sees Dave, (the next moments we see from Jerry's perspective) hands covered in his own (Dave's) blood, as he walks out of the house and towards the edge of the field

Dave: I am ready dark lord, I have accepted my sin and I want my punishment, take me, so my soul may be punished 

Action: Dave opens his arms like he's about to hug someone and after he's done talking he slowly begins to raise into the air 

Pg37

Action: and then dave quickly gets yanked above the field, he begins screaming in terror as he's pulled back and forth in the air until quickly being dragged straight to the ground with a mighty thud, we see Jerry in the window, absolutely terrified

Pg38

Action: Jerry looks back at bill

Jerry: bill, did ya see that

Action: bill silently nods

Bill: ye-yeah I did, what the hell is going on

Jerry: I don't know, I think only god knows

Pg39

Action: there's silence for a moment

Jerry: well, I don't think we should stay here

Bill: are you crazy, you saw what happened to Dave didn't ya

Jerry: yeah, that's all the more reason for us to bolt

Pg40

Bill: wha

Jerry: think about it, whatever that thing is, it'll come in for us eventually, and when it dose where cornered, best thing to do is book it to the car and drive as fast as we can

Action: Bill thinks for a moment

Bill: alright, let's get out of here, but you lead the way since it's your plan

Action: Jerry nods

Action: they walk back down the stairs from their hiding place 

Pg41

Action: we see Jerry and Bill slowly making their way through the dark decrepit farmhouse to it's back exit, the only light coming from the Moon outside, it's blue glow barely noticeable but something is following them

Pg42

Action: the backdoor is seen, Jerry silently jestjers to bill as they begin approaching the exit 

Pg43

Jerry: it looks like we may be home free billy

Action: bill does not respond and he's not seen behind Jerry as he's on the precipice of the exit

Pg44

Action: Jerry speed walks out the back door and turns back a smile on his face

Jerry: looks like where almost ho-

Action: Jerry's Joy quickly evaporates into utter fear as he looks back at something

Pg45 

Action: we see over the shoulder of Jerry into the hallway that the back door leads to from the outside, inside the dark dim house the legs of Bill are seen he's being pushed up against the wall and light choking sounds can be heard until his legs disappear into the darkness

Pg46

Action: silence for a moment until a blood curdling scream is heard Jerry petrified and fear as he looks at the back door, he sees a foot step out from the darkness into the pale moonlight of the night

Pg47

Jerry: wha, wha, what are you

Action: the thing completely steps out into the light yet we only see bits and pieces of its chard cadaverous form

Creature: I am here, to take you away

Pg48

Action: Jerry looks pale as he begins slowly stepping backwards tripping in the process which in a moment causes the creature to lunge in a blur of advanced motion

Pg49

Action: we see a full page the creature is seen in its entirety, it appears to have been a cop the entire front part of its body is charred and blackened guts hang out of its stomach as the skin and clothing that once covered it has now been burned away, his face is nothing but a skull, an angry skull with putrid ripped and torn skin around it, it's completely lit by the blue moonlight and towers over Jerry as it lunges towards his terrified miniscule crawling cowering form

Pg50

Action: black panel

Caption: the next day

Action: we see officers outside a police station looking at something, Them all baffled and confused

Cop 1: these are them all right from yesterday

Cop 2: what happened to them they seem different like they've seen something that made em paler then ghosts

Cop 3: that don't matter

Action: now we're looking at the criminals who robbed the bank all tied up together sitting on the concrete of the sidewalk in front of the police station, all of them seem too terrified to speak but in very different ways ranging from Jerry's twitchy terror, bills 1000 yard stare, Jon's brain dead fear and Dave closed eyes head down in some sort of prayer

Cop 3: what's important now is that we have them in custody and we have the goods they stole to return to the bank

Pg51

Action: we zoom out to see Sergeant spook looking at the situation from the top of a building across the street dusting his hands

Cop 3: besides judging from the looks of it I'd say we rather not know what got them

Sgt spook: well that's a job well done, I wonder if they've learned their lesson, now off to continue my eternal patrol for justice, but I wonder why they were screaming so much

Hope you enjoyed my story

Let me tell you about 

Colonel Charlton, The Skeleton 

The son of death who became a living skeleton and now protects the world as the leader and primary founder of the global sovereign organization known as the multi team

He was born a bastard to a rich family, this caused him to be vastly alienated from his family resolving in him becoming an alcoholic Playboy as soon as he could, then came the night that would change his life forever that of course being his death

He drunkenly walked along an Old bridge and soon fell into the ravine below when he woke up he was confronted by a figure he'd only seen once in his life, his father, however he looked different instead of being in the normal suit he was in a long dark cloak and he wielded a site

Then it was revealed to him that he was the son of the grim reaper, and as a result could not have his soul reaped even when his physical body died, that's resulting in him for a brief time becoming a living corpse as his body petrified and decomposed while it appeared that he was still alive,

This experience broke the young man and he fled into seclusion for weeks as his flesh right it off and he became nothing more than a living walking skeleton, then came the day where he truly came back to life

In the alleyway behind his opulent home he began to hurt howling and screaming ruckus laughter as a woman was terrorized by hoodlums and criminals, this hit the young man right ware his heart would be, and quickly she jumped out his window screaming the people below getting only a glimpse of the bony body, 

This site startled the men but emboldened their leader who tried to investigate only to find his nose met with the bony hand of Charlton, the resulting fear that a skeleton came to fight them resulted in the man running away screaming as if they were children and the girl sitting there in a stunned silence, 

After this night, Charlton knew what he must become, and using his wealth you became one of America's earliest modern masked avengers, The Skeleton

And so is the skeleton went on plenty of Adventures over the years ranging you from his various fights against the evil corruption of the world including gangsters, mobsters and what forth to his team up with fellow early hero the Ice Cube, his odd couple crusades with king ub and his various adventures post the creation of the multi-team like his friendship with mad Jack during the war, bitter separation from the US government due to McCarthy's attempted meddling in multi teams business and his team up with the second cosmic bombshell in their quest to avenger her mother, the first cosmic bombshell and him raising his adopted daughter the future Her Highness 

But I rather not give everything about this character away all at once (and I probably said too much as is) so you guys will have to wait and see what it comes from this hero

Thank you for reading, please let me know what you think and if you'd be interested in reading a comic about this guy, I hope you have a wonderful day